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Posted by ZooAnimal - October 8th, 2008


This is a story i made im gonna make it a full on book, so enjoy :)
(NOT DONE AND IM LOOKING FOR A TITLE.)
He sood before a broken world, being the only one left to the waistland that used to be a beautiful world.
His body quivvered for food when he picked up a bag of mcdonalds from the dusty road and ate slowley
beside the demolished building, the brown setting of the city layed in his hazel eyes.
The ruins made him drip in tears "Lilly"

24 Hours Earlier

"Lilly whats going on" The man said seeing bright lights surrounding the city, "DUCK" she yelled back,
running towards him with ashes covering her shoulders, the bright light came closer in rage, buildings
were feroshisly ripped apard, bricks covered the city streets painted with people.
Screaming could not excape the large firey beast quickly closing on their possition, "Lilly! go inside!" he
yelled directing her to the house.
They ran in seeing many people, "HELP ME!" a little girl said in the arms of an elderly woman with tears
poruing from her wrinkly face.
The city filled with fire and democracy.
Helicopters quickly took off, some avoided the explosion but others just became the storm of the city.
the man was covering his wife tightly covering her crying eyes, as she yelled "WHERE ARE MY CHILDREN"
the cieling collaped and all weent black.

24 Hours Later

He sniffed and whiped his nose with his arm, holding his shirt up to his mouth as the misterious gasses past
him.
He got up, ripping the piece of clothing that was wrapped around the street light pole, his eyes were
blurred, and he could only see the limited rubbels, looking at the sign overlooking the bridge it said
California, confused to where he was he sighed and walked, whiping his remaining tears, he only looked
straight, to the bodies that remained on the floor he did not want to see.
He took a path off the road and jumped down to a small beach, washing his face he had satisfaction,
he opened his eyes to a reflection in the oiley water.
His pupiles shrinked and his body quickly turned to the sight of a woman hanging from the street light.
He quickly took a piece of his pants and ripped it, tieing it around the pole he quickly climbed it.
"LILLY!" he said umpatiently, half way their he began to cry, knowing her fate, he knew she wasnt alive.
He slowley started to go back down, when dirt poured down on his face, he slowley moved his eyes up,
seeing his wife eyes wide open staring at him.
"Lill..." he said slowley.
She blinked and began to squirm,
"LILLY" he said excitedly, "Qhuahh" She grouned, as her pupils grew bigger turning bright yellow,
"Ru....un..." She said painfully, she began to grow bigger and now moving violently, "Han...k NOW!! RUN!!"
She said as her voice slowley got deeper.
Hank began to sprint down the pole and started to run, His wife now possed she leaped from the pole,
running adnormaly fast, doubling his speed.

38 HOURS Earlier

"A series of illness has broken out, and will spread quickly if we do not handle it" Said the man in a navy
suit.
"Its your call president" Said another.
"Set the bombs..." said the white haired man, walking out the doors.
"You heared the man, Chad" said another tapping the man with a radio on the shoulder.
"Seargent Gastin here..., calling all units, send an airstrike to California" Said Chad, as he quickly whiped
tears from his eyes.
700 miles from their location lied a fleet of planes, " You heard him, lets cause some fire.", the fleet
Quickly changed their route.
The president stood before millions, the world. "A sickness has broken out, a quarantene will surround
California, no questions asked,


Comments

I like it David, it's good. I think you should try to pull a pulp fiction like say 30 minutes eariliers. 1 minute earlier. Also try to make the readeer guess some stuff. And leave small detailes so when you go back in time those small details make sense like heres an awful example

The stupid bitch was walking around her fucked up city and seen a whole waq of shit on the wall including alot of penis's

10 HOURS Earlier
The whole btich ass loved their penis

1 hours eariliers

Their penis be chopped off noooooooooooooooooooooooooooo d

do you get my idea still but it's a very very good story and i hope it does get some fame so yeh keep up the good work..........Lesbian asses

thanks for your messed up imput

lmfao