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Blurbalion I am the Walrus king Suck my dick <3
David Maher
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LoveShineHero
I like it David, it's good. I think you should try to pull a pulp fiction like say 30 minutes eariliers. 1 minute earlier. Also try to make the readeer guess some stuff. And leave small detailes so when you go back in time those small details make sense like heres an awful example
The stupid bitch was walking around her fucked up city and seen a whole waq of shit on the wall including alot of penis's
10 HOURS Earlier
The whole btich ass loved their penis
1 hours eariliers
Their penis be chopped off noooooooooooooooooooooooooooo d
do you get my idea still but it's a very very good story and i hope it does get some fame so yeh keep up the good work..........Lesbian asses
ZooAnimal
thanks for your messed up imput